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Monday, June 29, 2020

The Mirror

THE MIRROR
Once on a sunny evening there was a Knock Knock Knock as Jim's mother opened the living room door.
Jim was a tall boy with dark brown hair and they had a dog.they lived in a dark and gloomy forest where
there were only ani- males and no people. 


Jim was board playing with his toy’s so he asked his mum if he and his dog could go and get some of his
old toys that were in the attic but he got distracted by an old mirror that was there he touched the big red
mirror and his hand could go through it so then he walked through it and he found himself in a desert
surrounded by sand dunes and some pyramids.


There was a palm tree and a stream of water so that he knew where to go back to after had finished his
joueur in the distinct he could see a sand colued camel the camel could talk so he said i will take you to a
house full of gold  the camel said the camel was a bad camel and it was a trap but Jim and his dog didn't





know. After a 7 Minute walk they came to a house full of gold so they went in it and as soon as they were
inside a gril named Jane shut them in.

Jim fond an old tallbox and used it to brak the bricks and after the dog dug them out they looked around to make sure that there was no Jane or camel and they went back they found the palm tree and went throw it and they were home safe home.

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