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Monday, June 29, 2020

The Mirror

THE MIRROR
Once on a sunny evening there was a Knock Knock Knock as Jim's mother opened the living room door.
Jim was a tall boy with dark brown hair and they had a dog.they lived in a dark and gloomy forest where
there were only ani- males and no people. 


Jim was board playing with his toy’s so he asked his mum if he and his dog could go and get some of his
old toys that were in the attic but he got distracted by an old mirror that was there he touched the big red
mirror and his hand could go through it so then he walked through it and he found himself in a desert
surrounded by sand dunes and some pyramids.


There was a palm tree and a stream of water so that he knew where to go back to after had finished his
joueur in the distinct he could see a sand colued camel the camel could talk so he said i will take you to a
house full of gold  the camel said the camel was a bad camel and it was a trap but Jim and his dog didn't





know. After a 7 Minute walk they came to a house full of gold so they went in it and as soon as they were
inside a gril named Jane shut them in.

Jim fond an old tallbox and used it to brak the bricks and after the dog dug them out they looked around to make sure that there was no Jane or camel and they went back they found the palm tree and went throw it and they were home safe home.

Wednesday, May 27, 2020

How to write as blog post and comment

Hi it's me again.This week for writing we had to write how to write a blog and a comment. Here is my work.

What do you need to have in a good blog post?
You need a catchy title and at the end you need a question. You also need to tell then what your goal is and what your story is about .             
What do you need to have in a good comment?
In a good comment you need something positive for the reader. You also need something thoughtful
so that means you tell them what you did. Then you right something helpful.
Did you learn anything from my blog?




Monday, April 6, 2020


I woke up this morning and what do you know i saw Tintin and snowy in my backyard then do you
know what we were in the land off blue gold Tintin told me that Rastapopoulos was up to
something he had blow up a ship that was coming to bring in some special cargo now he is
getting people to look for the special cargo one off the spies found out where his hideout is.
Where is it i asked first there is a secret a door which says do not come in then there is a secret
barrel that leads to a tunnel then there is lots off rooms ok lets go but how will we get in i know
we went down the chimney then we made sure that there was no one coming then in one room
there were lots off drugs then snowy heard a noise so we hid behind a crate then Allen who was
one off the persons helping do the drugs took a crap away Tintin said they are probably selling
them to someone that wants to sell them.Then we back when we were about to leave we saw
someone who was coming so we went back inside just if he was prat off the operation he was so
then we went home to where Tintin's hotel was.The Next morning we went to the docks another
ship had arrived we asked if we could have a look to see if there was any drugs on board the ship
then we heard some footsteps it must be Rastapopoulos and his gang and it was they tried to shot
us but they didn't we ran off the ship and to land one ship a week then we went to Tintin's hotel and
had lunch we ate burgers for lunch captain Haddock How was at the Museum there was a little
crowded near where the pearl was  but it was gone someone has stolen it but who Tintin thinks it
is Rastapopoulos then he yelled Rastapopoulos is getting away with the pearl he's heading for the
airport Tintin said. Quickly in the car Tintin said we must catch him he's arrived at the airport he's
taking a plan to India we must take the plan to India to.3 hours later we´v arrived in India now he's
going to take a ferry back to the land off blue gold let's go on the ferry to.It's nearly lunchtime lets
go to the restaurant maybe Rastapopoulos will be eating there to what do you want to eat i will eat
some lolly cake said Tintin and i will have some Bacon and egg pie i said after we finish do you
want to get some fresh air ok im done im done to said Tintin lets go and get some fresh ear it feels
so good to get some fresh ear now and again doesn't it yip you are right Ttintin i wonder what
rastapopoulos is doing right now let's go to our cabin and play some games ok ok said Tintin lets
play fifa 20 ok Tintin 9-9 good game that was really tight look its Rastapopoulos and Dr Mueller.
I wonder how they make all those drugs.I think they were planning to meet here anyway.Let's ring
the police they will arrive soon ok look here they come you are under arrest.When i woke up i was
back in my bed it was six thirty so i woke up and i went to see what was for breakfast and do you
know what it was it was pancakes.  

Thursday, March 12, 2020

This term, our Project Based Learning (PBL) started with us having to form groups and
collaboratively create Jolly Jars for the school fair. This task helped us to begin exploring
our PBL question for the term - How can we build community through our actions? We had to
research ideas, be creative with our product, experiment with our materials and write instructions
that could be followed by others. Here is a link to my instructions. I learnt that instructions need to… have steps and a title also need to have materials Reflection on PBL: For our Jolly Jar my group...we made sock puppets I contributed to my group by...i bote in some jars Our Jolly Jar was creative because...we thot sock puppets would be fun What I learned about working with others was...we need to lean to work with other people How did we build community through our actions? ...we made a jolly jar to raise money for the bick trak